Monday, October 27, 2008
Ms.Melville
There are two reason the animal's belives Napeloen's lie's . One reason is because they couldn't read . And two they were scared of the dogs Napeloen have. One example of them not being able to read is when them didn't know the rule's got changed and the only animal that could read Benjamin had to tell them about the rules. Another example of when they believe's is because he has the dog'son his side. They believed because he took the dog's when they where puppy's and trained them. And anybody that get in Napeloen's way would get attact by the dog's. That's why the animal's believe Napeloen's lie's.
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You have two strong reasons (yellows).
However, you needed to write three red sentences (examples, evidence, quotes) after each one of the reasons to back it up.
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